I only really needed to rewrite the line about Coke to be about water...
Here are my storyboard-things (just a quick pass over the shots in the video + what I'm changing) in GIF form. I will be redesigning the people to not be... real people...
Thoughts on whether they ought to be children/animals/whatever?
Not unusual that your creative process should lead in another direction, ie toward your sister. I think it is a great improvement for many reasons. Did she sing the words here you rewrote: "I'd like to find something clean to drink that's good for me"?
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