As we discussed, this is a bit approximate in color choices. Also the drama of the factory interior and the vegetable gardens is important to your unusual story. So the sentences should be altered,particularly No. 4 when the children figure out where they actually are?
As we discussed, this is a bit approximate in color choices. Also the drama of the factory interior and the vegetable gardens is important to your unusual story. So the sentences should be altered,particularly No. 4 when the children figure out where they actually are?
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